This author is adding to the 'women can't draw action scenes' stereotype. If she spent more effort learning to draw action scenes instead of useless stencilled background every panel she might have made a more convincing story. Author made a bad decision to write crime drama sub genre, with ZERO ability to draw anything beyond blushing faces. There are walls of text, interactions and flashbacks that add 0 nuance or insight into the storyģ. The story should have ended in max 15 chapters.Ģ. Enough pining and drama to keep you engaged for a time. Last updated on February 5th, 2023, 7:28am It was as if the next parts of the story relied on a simple incident and I didn’t like how unnatural that went. I kept thinking that if those tiny details didn’t happen in the first place, there was no way the story would move forward. While I did love the progress (the result, how it turned out) of the story as contrary to what I just said, what I didn’t like was the WAY it was handled. Whenever something big came up, it seemed too good to be true. I was glad that it didn't add to the drama that could potentially hinder a much more important piece of the story. I have read a lot of shoujo manga where the FL was initially having troubles sorting her feelings out, but Teru was outspoken on her feelings for Kurosaki and vice versa. The revelation was just to prepare everyone for a darker road concerning Kurosaki and Teru’s past. I didn’t expect the big reveal to be a little early in the story, but again, it was just the entrance in a tunnel. What mattered was how Kurosaki was supposed to play both the lolicon janitor and the mysterious benefactor without giving himself away. The author never intended to hide Daisy’s identity from the readers and that’s fine. Character design? Well, I kind of liked Tasuku’s art he is so freaking hot! Revealing Kurosaki Tasuku’s real identity was just the tip of the iceberg, and of course we somehow expected that there was more to his past and the people surrounding him.

The story has transitioned from having one obvious goal in mind to uncovering a much more serious issue.

電撃デイジー 6 by Kyousuke Motomi